2010年1月24日 星期日

story line new edition4

It is a story about a boy, Ba Fon, fail to pass the exam (background would not be shown in the animation), from then on he become a homeboy. He had no motivation to do anything, even to play his beloved bus, he thought that his fail in the exam was caused by bus, so he hate but bus in the beginning of the story.

His younger brother, Ba Fun, loved bus, and he started to have some planning to show that his hobby is not wasting of time; at the same time, he wanted to cheer his brother up. Every time he forced Ba Fon to participate his activities, in order to motivate Ba Fon again. However, in Ba Fon ‘s view, his brother ‘s action was a disaster, and he was afraid to do any the bus research activities with his brother.

One day, Fun had a new idea on the bus research development, he wanted to told his brother Fon, but Fon again did not seem interested in it, and even said, ‘I am not going to be bus driver, why should I need to know!? (夠啦!好煩呀!我又唔係要做巴士司機,做咩要知你d結果呀!?)’. Fun was disappointed and he left a message, which is a code message to Fon, and went away. Fon woke up and could not find Fun, but only the message. Fon read the message, and his face changed. He went into Fun’s room, and found that there were a lot of papers and books on the table, and a big chart on his wall. He looked closer to the chart, it seemed like a code system, and the title of the chart is called “bus code”, he finally figured out what research his brother Fun was doing, and also knew that why Fun was working so hard on breaking the bus code. The message touched Fon. And Fon went to find Fun.

This was the first time Fon went out to the street after he fail the exam, when Fon was finding Fun, some flash back starts, it was the day before Fon’s exam and was Fun’s birthday, Fon took Fun to have a bus trip, and Fun was so excited. Fun said, ‘Bus driver was really great, I want to be bus driver when I grown up!” ”then I would be a person as great as bus driver when I grown up, I promise” Fon said(分:「巴士司機好利害呀! 日都載着不同的人,駕駛着這麼大的巴士,安全到達目的地,我大個要做巴士司機!」方:「咁我都唔可以輸,我要做一個同巴士司機一樣利害的人。」).

Fon found Fun finally in the bus stop. They took the bus trip together again. When they got off the bus, Fon took out a paper, which was the message that Fun left to him. The flash back started again, on Fun’s birthday, when the Ba’s got off the bus, Fon told a code to Fun, and said, ”It is the bus code, this is our secret.” After that, Fun started to do the bus research to try to break the bus code and show the answer to his brother, this was the reason why Fun do so many research on bus at the beginning of the story.

Fun got the message from Fon, and he found that the code have broken by his brother, and said ”My answer is right, the code the route of this bus trip and the time arrived of this trip.” Fun was happy that he had the right answer. “I am sorry. I have wasted so much time, I would take the exam again to keep my promise.” Fon said.(方:「對唔住!一直要你擔心!我會努力再考試,去證明我係得嫁,今次我唔會放棄!」)

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