story line new edition2

Animation Reference2

Chinese painting style animations, one with simple lines and one is more complicated and detailed.

This animation transition is good, similar as the first one.

I think the style is greaT, and I think that I can use it as reference to present the time(show the activities in club).

what is the ending?!

After asking some opinions, there are numbers of endings developed:

1. 哥哥一直不了解弟弟的興趣, 最後遇到困難, 卻是靠弟弟對巴士的認識, 解決問題!!!並發現弟弟對巴士的鍾愛, 全因小時候與哥哥乘巴士的快樂回憶....

2. 弟弟為招攬會員, 在網上大力宣傳會社, 惹來反對"電車"文化的網民組織反巴士會社聯盟.......弟弟不單沒有被打沉, 反而把自己與哥哥的相片post上網, 並解構巴士會社的意義, 以示會長及副會長對巴士會社的支持!!!!
哥哥與弟弟出席朋友聚會, 被朋友問起此事, 哥哥辯稱沒有這回事, 只是被人戲弄而已, 但弟弟卻堅持道出巴士會社是二人所成立的, 哥哥被朋友視作電車男, 不斷揶揄他, 他按捺不住....便直斥弟弟是電車男和說出對佢的不滿

3. 佢同細路一起參加一個巴士迷活動上咗電視，所以全人類都識佢地la,哥哥其實想上電視嫁，但係細路以為佢介意，叫人打格仔向哥哥到，哥哥覺得細路唔了解佢，細路反轉話哥哥先係

哥哥開頭覺得這個會冇出息，但最後竟然有人訪問細路，覺得佢都幾利害wow，所以都想一斉上tv

哥哥其實想上電視嫁，但係細路以為佢介意，叫人打格仔向哥哥到，哥哥覺得細路唔了解佢，細路反轉話哥哥先係

4. 話其實弟弟一直將影落黎既相放入書冊,,,last 1頁貼左好多哥哥陪弟弟bus既相,自白話好thanks哥,唔覺意俾哥搵到本野睇到

5. 個ending話哥哥發現其實佢好想做1個巴士司機,,,之後佢負責揸,弟就影

6. 哥哥被bus撞死左

story line new edition

problems of the story writing

the 1st edition story problem:

Before that I need to repeat my objective again, (since when thinking about the story, I always forget these point), I want to show that although those people(otaku/ train man) have a special hobby, but they just one of us, nothing special, and I want the others get to know about this people. After clear my mind, I found those problems from my story:

1)Why people need to understand these people, isn't they really important? (I need to explain that they are people nearby, and they are a kind of professional.)

2)If this a story of an otaku's life, is it to direct, and not impress enough? (I need to add some parts that the audiences are in sympathy with me, or make something more special to impress them.)

3)How to show that they are actually not very special?(may be make some comparison.)

reference animation

The style and the art direction of these animations are good

This can be a reference for the story, because the story line of this animation is simple be interesting, but the script and sound is very important in this kind of animation.

trendy train man story(1st edition)

　　有一位兄長一直都不肯向朋友介紹自己的弟弟給他的朋友們認識，為什麼呢？因為他的弟弟是一位「電車男」，亦即是「御宅族」。他的弟弟常常都會對着模型傻笑，唯一的朋友就是家中的電腦，有時會參加一些古怪社團的活動，如巴士攝影，西鐵開幕禮等，總之是一些一般人不會做的事。所以，哥哥怕當朋友們知道自己的弟弟是一個如此奇怪的人，會影響到自己的形象。

　　一天晚上，家裡只有兄弟二人，哥哥趁弟弟正在玩電腦時，想悄悄地溜出街去參加朋友的聚會。在出門之際，被弟弟發現，弟弟苦苦哀求哥哥帶他一起出去見識一番，哥哥沒有辦法，只好帶弟弟一起去朋友的聚會，但條件是要弟弟不要向朋友表露自己的興趣，弟弟想了想，最後答應了。

　　聚會過後，已經是深夜了，朋友們都正在為沒有班車回家而煩惱。這時，弟弟一開口就說出十多條行車路線。朋友們都聽得目瞪口呆，同時覺得弟弟很利害，因為他竟然連這些資訊都知道得一清二楚。這時，哥哥突然覺得弟弟對他的興趣的熱誠和執著，其實也不是什麼壞事，就好像自己對滑流物品的執著一樣。因此，他亦開始接受弟弟的奇怪興趣。

The story is about a relationship of bothers. A boy was always worry about that his friends may know his younger brother, it was because his younger brother was an "otaku", which they only interested in transportations, computers, and animations, and they have no real friend, their best friend is internet. So, the boy afraid that if his friends knew about his brother, this would badly affect his image.

One night, when the boy prepared to go to party and leave his brother alone in home, his brother begged him to take him to the party. The boy had no idea to regret his brother, so he took his brother to the party, and his brother agree to be normal in the party to avoid others know that he is an "otaku".

After the party, it is already mid-night, the boy's friends were worrying about there was no bus to go home, the boy's brother told them all the bus routes quickly. The boy's friends felt surprise that the boy got a amazing brother. The boy suddenly found that his brother was not strange at all, his brother was put more effort on his hobby that the others only. And after that, he started to understand his brother.